Dear McCall,
To be honest I have been studying your blog since your
first post, I can honestly say you are my favorite writer in the class, I read
every single one of your post multiple times so I could find something to write
down on the “the Bad” column of my paper, I couldn't find a thing, I would
start to write something on the bad column but then I’d be like wait I actually
really like that about your blog so I would write it on the “the Good” column. Anyways
here’s my thoughts but first I will let your own words sum up the whole blog “If
you really knew me you would know 99% of my post are about love” this is true
but most definitely not bad.
The Good: K I absolutely love how in some of your post
especially the earlier ones you would randomly throw in a couple lines that
would rhyme, not all the lines, just some, just enough to make you feel
something more and different.
Ice Box’s
Lets talk about love, like you said 99% of your posts are
about love, and that is so cool. I don’t know you all that well so I don’t know
who you are writing about, but I wish I did, the way you write about him makes
me think he is god and that you have the strongest testimony he is real. Hahah that
was cheesy, anyways I can tell love is what you love so I love reading what you
write about, it is so beautiful and you are so good at it. Keep it up, I hope
love works out for you.
Your blog is funny, your blog is cute, your blog is deep,
your blog made me sad, your blog made me happy, your blog made me hope, your
blog made me want to write, I want to write now.
I like brown eyes, but for reals your “tell me your story
post is so good” you brought up eyes multiple times in your post and its
beautiful and so good and ahh so good.
The Bad:
Favorite posts: (you) (me) (rain) (pain) (moon), the one
about you wanting your crayons back, “head Trauma” I loved how this post was
written, and how bricks are more then just bricks. “Birds Eye View” this post
is unreal and I think it just flows and goes so smooth, this post has 0
comments, and I think that that is beautiful for this post but it also deserved
so many, this is one of my favorites of yours and I would love to see you slam
it in class I think that would be so cool, maybe you already have idk.”tell me
your story” is so so so so good holy shiz its so good. “RIP” “Raps Pt. 2” “Him”
“pocket lint” “creativeonmothersday” I
know put like all of your posts on here but they are all so so so good I wanted
to swear after reading everyone cause they were so good.
Favorite lines:”how did 3 snack packs turn into “its ok I’m
not hungry” “sometimes we fly, mostly we fall” “we have more fun then lost boys”
“people always say I’m beautiful but they don’t see the cruelty behind mascara”
“please believe me this time” “10:53 and I don’t give a damn about AP
Psychology because the chairs in my class room are slowly starting to empty” “I
know I always write about love but I’m 18 with the stars in my eyes”
Your blog is a 10, I am jealous of your writing so much and
wish I could write more like you. The only advice I can give you is to write
more, I want to read more and more from you so please write more, also in some
of your posts I could tell you were just writing to write, write about what you
love, not about what you think other people will like to read, its your blog
and its so good. Thank you for letting me review your blog.
P.S. Perhaps is such a great word, same with "alas" these were great words to a great post with a great ending.
P.P.S. awhile back i posted a tweet with a list of girls i've ever had a crush on and I think your blog would be the first non human to make that list, also i never watched the jonas brothers but I am guessing it would be like having a crush on one of them
